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Whiteness I Have Known #

I. Context & Subject Matter #

In her first year at Cambridge, Plath had hired an old horse called Sam who was expected to be placid, but bolted with the inexperienced rider on his back. It was her first attempt at horse riding – “First horse under me”. While it was a frightening and dangerous experience, Plath recalled it as a time when she felt immensely alive. 

It formed the basis of the thrilling horse-ride described in both “Whiteness I Remember” and a later poem Ariel.

For a third perspective of the same ride refer to Ted Hughes’ poem *Sam. *

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Whiteness I Remember

*Whiteness being what I remember
About Sam: whiteness and the great run
He gave me. I’ve gone nowhere since but
Going’s been tame deviation. White,
Not of heraldic stallions: off-white
Of the stable horse whose history’s
Humdrum, unexceptionable, his
Tried sobriety hiring him out
To novices and to the timid.
Yet the dapple toning his white down
To safe gray never grayed his temper. *

I see him one-tracked, stubborn, white horse,
First horse under me, high as the roofs,
His near trot pitching my tense poise up,
Unsteadying the steady-rooted green
Of country hedgerows and cow pastures
To a giddy jog. Then for ill will
Or to try me he suddenly set
Green grass streaming, houses a river
Of pale fronts, straw thatchings,
hooves four hammers to jolt

* Me off into their space of  beating, *

*Stirrups undone, and decorum. And
Wouldn’t slow for the hauled reins, his name,
Or shouts of walkers: crossed traffic
Stalling curbside at his oncoming,
The world subdued to his run of it.
I hung on his neck. Resoluteness
Simplified me: a rider, riding
Hung out over the hazard, over hooves
Loud on earth’s bedrock. Almost thrown, not
Thrown: fear, wisdom, at one: all colors
Spinning to still in his one whiteness. *

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II. Sound Effects #

Read the poem aloud. Comment on the Sound Effects, verbal music. It’s rhyme. Rhythm and melody. Assonance, alliteration. Onomatopoeia. etc. (Blending repetition patterns. slow/fast movement, harsh, discordant, sibilance, sotto, allegro,  Rhapsodic, lyrical, elegiac,  upbeat,  blue, staccato,  dirge, ode,   Melody. tone. mood. atmosphere. voice.

Poets can make words sing by blending meaning and using sound to convey mood in an emotive and suggestive manner.  Some poets deliberately use incantation and repetition in an attempt to cast a spell over their readers, allowing them to escape reality and enter the world of dreams, imagination and fantasy.  The subtle repetition of vowel sounds (rhyme, assonance) can create a distinctive mood or ambience.  The repetition of consonants (alliteration) can also obliquely affect the emotions of the responders.

 This appears to be a straightforward literal account of Sylvia Plath’s terrifying “novice” ride on what was supposed to be a placid horse that turns and “bolts” on its way home to give her the ride of her life.   The poem begins with a subdued descriptive account of the scene and the horse but then dramatises the ride by increasing the pace from a trot to a jog and finally an uncontrollable bolt.  This is done by ellipsis and a change of rhythm:

Then for ill will
Or to try me he suddenly set
Green grass streaming, houses a river
Of pale fronts, straw thatchings,    hooves four hammers to jolt
Me off into their space of  beating,….

III. Themes, Issues, Values, Concerns

This poem expresses the feelings of a heightened death defying experience and how it focuses all our being in survival.  It strips all other concerns as staying alive is paramount.  The whiteness refers to either the white light near death survivors allude to or the intensity and purity of the experience.

I hung on his neck. Resoluteness
Simplified me

Kierkegaard wrote: 

*         “Death in earnest gives life force as nothing else does; it makes one alert as nothing else does.”  *

When faced by death we suddenly begin to value life and an instinctive self preservation sets in.   At times it creates a raised consciousness or awareness.

* ‘How to reactivate the myth of a flight so white, so pure, as to be a rebirth into the imagined liberty of childhood?*’ (Gilbert and Gunbar in Brennan 1999:54)

IV. TECHNIQUE #

Structure*: linear, circular, episodic, flash backs, climatic.     **Images**: (visual, auditory, olfactory, tactile, gustatory) **figures of sp eech**:  similes, metaphors, personification, analogy, synecdoche, contrast, antithesis, unity, irony, Allusions, etc*

White is the blending or composite of all colours. 

all colors
Spinning to still in his one whiteness.

White Words: These words are synonymous with white or represent various shades of the colour white.  White can represent the passion and intensity of white heat.  Others include: Snow, pearl, bells, lace, swans, ice, sugar, antique white, ivory, chalk, milk white, lily, smoke, seashell, old lace, cream, linen, ghost white, beige, cornsilk, alabaster, paper, whitewash. 

The two recurring patterns in her texts and life:  namely that in some way Plath is enclosed ‘…in plaster, in a bell jar, a cellar, a cave or a wax house…’  perhaps she is yearning for the safety of the womb.

 V. LANGUAGE: #

Approach*: Subjective/Objective, Attitude or **Tone**, Audience,   **Style**: diction, word play, puns, connotative/denotative,   emotive (coloured biased,) /demotive, (technical, dispassionate) clichés, proverbial, idiomatic, expressive, flat, Jargon, euphemisms, pejorative, oxymoron.   **Gender** biases.  **Register**:  formal, stiff, dignified  or Colloquial;  relaxed, conversational, inclusive, friendly  or Slang;  colourful, intimate,  **Rhetorical devices**;  Questions,  exclamations,  cumulation,  crescendo,  inversion,  bathos,  repetition,  3 cornered phrases. *

Language of White:

White is pure, new, untested; the beginning as opposed to black’s ending, it is YES to black’s NO.

The use of white in familiar phrases can help a designer see how their colour of choice might be perceived by others, both the positive and negative aspects.

Good white

   White hats represent the good – the hero,

   doves, virginity in wedding dresses.

White as the driven snow - pure, clean, innocent

White elephant - rare, valuable but perhaps unwanted

White knight - someone who comes to another person’s rescue, someone perceived as being good, noble

White list - list of good or acceptable items

White sale - sale of sheets, towels, other linens

Pearly white - teeth, especially very white teeth

Bad white

Whitewash - cover up, conceal

Whiteout - zero visibility

White flag - surrender

White lightning - moonshine, illegal whiskey

White elephant - rare, valuable but perhaps unwanted

White knuckle - something that is fast, exciting, or frightening

White light is also a feature people who have been brought back to life report they have seen.

This is not one of Plath’s major poems, however it is very useful in comparing it with another of her poems - Ariel and that of Hughes poem on the same incident:  Sam.